ZOOMYGOSH! I actually didn't hear about the scene kid verses emo at Austrailia. I agree it's pathetic and actually kind of sad. I'm strongly agianst steryotypes and it bothers me that our society has carried it out so far that fights are occurring because of it, globably. Fandilocks I agree with you to a certain standpoint. I actually feel the EXACT same way about ryhmeing poetry. I never actually wrote poetry that ryhmed nor have I ever liked reading ryming poetry. However I think, it's actually a little more risky to write rhyming poetry because by rhyming words it can easily make or break the rythem and if it breaks it then it kind of washes out the depth or the perspective behind it, if you get what I'm saying. Iv'e come to realize though that I don't nessarily think that rhyeming destroys the purpose of form and function on equal playing fields, it's just a diffrent way and a diffrent idea of pursing the perspective of the author through a diffrent style. Like I said, though, this definatley isn't one my strongest peices, and I know that, I probably should have written free verse to begin with, ( I'll remember to stick with that next time ) but I apreciate the criticism and I hope you won't give up on me just yet and you can read some of my other material and hopefully you will like it better =-)
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